Tuesday, September 04, 2007

Review of that last review, by Johnathan.

You know what? That last review, it's all over the place. If you haven't read it yet, wait a day or so. If you have... maybe try it again in a bit. I'm off to edit.

NOT APPROVED

UPDATE:

I'm much more happy with it now. It reads much more smoothly. I'm not saying it's Keats or anything, just that it no longer looks like it was composed by an angry bear with a keyboard.

JOHN APPROVED

2 comments:

Blockade Boy said...

"...an angry bear with a keyboard."

You just had to toss in that little dig at me, didn't you?

Johnathan said...

Damn! So perceptive!

Must... veil... insults... more effectively!